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前腐后继 2007-4-8 00:34:00
14 - Defined their hair more, changed her right hand, and added more cast shadow to his right hand. 15 - Started refining the balcony, worked on her hair more, and got rid of the stray strands because they distracted from her face too much.
16 - Turned off the leaves layer so I can see the cast shadows better. Added cast shadows from them and on them, the railing, banisters, balcony..etc. Defined the balcony more. 17 - Refined the cast shadows more, and added more highlight to her legs. 18 - I wasn't sure how much foliage I wanted or where I wanted them, so I asked Steven Stahlberg for his opinion. He sent me a critique in the form of this paint-over. He's great to bounce ideas off or get a fresh perspective from. I really enjoyed working with him side-by-side at Optidigit, both as artist and creator/writer. He gives excellent critique on writing as well. We still have a collaboration that's not finished yet--the ball's in my court at the moment. 19 - I changed some details on her camisole, lightened her hair in the back, lightened his hand, shortened his shirt tail, tweaked the cast shadows, .. etc. 20 - Toned down some of the contrast on the rock wall, and repainted the lower part of his shirt, his legs, and shoes. 20a - Added foliages and cast shadows from them. 20b - Variation with foliage only on bottom.
20c - Variation with foliage only on top.
21 - Finished version. Decided to go with foliage on both top and bottom, as it gave more depth to the scene and filled out the composition more. I refined the foliages and cast shadows, then darkened the foliage on the bottom so it's less distracting, but still provided the decorative effect I wanted. Added a cast shadow from her chin on his right index finger. Closing Comments - Closing comment - Many people didn't seem to like this piece very much, telling me that it's one of my weaker pieces, while a small minority of people said it's one of their favorites of mine--Linda Bergkvist in particular--which surprised me because she told me that after I had already had a lot of negative response from everyone else. It just goes to show you how different our tastes can be. I personally have mixed feeltings about the piece--it's too clean for my taste and the composition is a bit static, but I also prefer more iconic compositions and I think the lighting worked out well. This is also one of the very few pieces where the result came pretty close to the original intent--we all know how rare that is.
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06 - Worked on the wall of the building.
Stone Texture - Here's a close-up of how I painted the wall. On the left, you could see that I used a photo as the base, with the color changed to match the scene, and then just painted directly on top. As you can see, you can barely see any of the original texture after I finished painting. If I had known I'd end up